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    Post by Oniyokai Sat Apr 18, 2020 8:47 pm

    Name: Kemuri Sense
    Specialty: Ninjutsu
    Rank: D-Rank
    Element: -
    Cost: 10 (5 to Sustain)
    Range: Within Smoke
    Duration: 3 Rounds of Posting or Sustainable

    Description: A jutsu that is only usable if one is able to use the smoke manipulation kekkai genkai. This jutsu serves a sensory technique as one is able to sense anything that moves within the smoke that comes from the user or natural smoke that the user's own personal has encountered. The sensory picks up on any obstacles it encounters sort of like sonar with the smoke essentially being able to map out an area that it encompasses. It should be noted that one must be standing still in order to properly sense movement.
    Status: Open


    Last edited by Oniyokai on Tue Apr 21, 2020 12:55 pm; edited 1 time in total
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    Post by Admin Tue Apr 21, 2020 12:40 pm

    This jutsu is fine, just add a little more detail to make it more clear. When using jutsu i would say you need to remain still to accumilate all the information as it sonars out. Also, since it is instant, you can not see everything but for an instant, having to use memory for the rest of duration.
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    Post by Oniyokai Tue Apr 21, 2020 12:55 pm

    Edited.
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    Post by Admin Tue Apr 21, 2020 12:56 pm

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