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    Letony
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    Post by Letony on Mon Aug 03, 2020 10:53 pm

    Name: Konowari Secret Illusion: Incorporeal Nightmare
    Senses Affected: Touch
    Rank: C-Rank
    Element: N/A
    Trigger: Sight
    Cost: 15 Chakra
    Range: 0-10m
    Duration: 3 Posts

    Description: After creating the necessary hand seal, when the target witnesses the user point any of their fingers, they will be caught in an illusion affecting their hand eye coordination and kinestethetics. The target will experience an illusion as though their limbs are sluggish or delayed in responding to input. This burdens the target’s ability to control chakra flow into their limbs and the ability to utilize them efficiently, increasing the expenditure of chakra and stamina by an additional 5 CP and SP per technique used, for the duration of this technique.
    Status: Private


    Last edited by Letony on Wed Aug 12, 2020 8:02 pm; edited 2 times in total




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    Post by Genkumaru on Wed Aug 12, 2020 4:49 pm

    Due to the strength of the effect let's bump this up to B-rank as you have two effects going on, a pain and sensory effect as well as a resource pool bleed.

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    Post by Letony on Wed Aug 12, 2020 4:54 pm

    @Genkumaru wrote:Due to the strength of the effect let's bump this up to B-rank as you have two effects going on, a pain and sensory effect as well as a resource pool bleed.

    Bumping it up to B-Rank would make this technique virtually the exact same as my other technique at B-Rank, making it pointless. Is there anything else you can do with this that doesn't involve bumping it all the way to B good sir? For example removing the pain effect. Konowari Secret Illusion: Phantom Nightmare




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    Composite Bow x1
    Katana x1
    Gear
    Archer's Quiver x1 
    (Holds 1 Small item and 20 Tiny items)
    Small
    Ice Bombs x3 
    Tiny
    Channeller's Arrows x1 
    Smoke Grenade x1 
    Exploding Note x1
    Shuriken x1
    Kunai x1
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    Post by Genkumaru on Wed Aug 12, 2020 5:35 pm

    Let's try this then possibly as the descriptors lead to a few questions. At the core you want a punishing Genjutsu at lower costs that has a resource pool bleed so I suggest the following edit.



    After creating the necessary hand seal, when the target witnesses the user point any of their fingers, they will be caught in an illusion affecting their hand eye coordination and kinestethetics. The target will experience an illusion as though their limbs are sluggish or delayed in responding to input. This burdens the target’s ability to control chakra flow into their limbs and the ability to utilize them efficiently, increasing the expenditure of chakra and stamina by an additional 5 CP and SP per technique used, for the duration of this technique.

    Letony
    Letony
    B-Rank
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    Posts : 125

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    Post by Letony on Wed Aug 12, 2020 5:41 pm

    @Genkumaru wrote:Let's try this then possibly as the descriptors lead to a few questions. At the core you want a punishing Genjutsu at lower costs that has a resource pool bleed so I suggest the following edit.



    After creating the necessary hand seal, when the target witnesses the user point any of their fingers, they will be caught in an illusion affecting their hand eye coordination and kinestethetics. The target will experience an illusion as though their limbs are sluggish or delayed in responding to input. This burdens the target’s ability to control chakra flow into their limbs and the ability to utilize them efficiently, increasing the expenditure of chakra and stamina by an additional 5 CP and SP per technique used, for the duration of this technique.

    I like this a lot. o.o Thanks Doc. Edited.




    Items/Gear/Weapons:

    Current Items/Gear
    Medium
    Composite Bow x1
    Katana x1
    Gear
    Archer's Quiver x1 
    (Holds 1 Small item and 20 Tiny items)
    Small
    Ice Bombs x3 
    Tiny
    Channeller's Arrows x1 
    Smoke Grenade x1 
    Exploding Note x1
    Shuriken x1
    Kunai x1
    Genkumaru
    Genkumaru
    S-Rank
    S-Rank

    Posts : 652
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    Post by Genkumaru on Wed Aug 12, 2020 8:04 pm

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